OMG i have NEVER seen you draw an action scene like that before... this is definetly one of my all time favorites!! i just love that kind of heroic pose they make as they battle back-to-back! u rock caz!
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is it just me or is SHOOP DA WHOOP overrated? lol
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Where did you get the background photograph? And the textures you used on the pants and dress aren't quite... right... try drawing in your own textures, because it will give them more personality. Also, your characters need more structure... the girl's chest looks a bit wonky, you might want to make her boobs smaller and start them lower.
And the shading needs work. In some places it's good, but you need to make it consistant. Like on the girl's hand and wrist, the fireball should give off more light, so there wouldn't be a shadow so close to it on her wrist. A shadow is basically the absence of light. When you have light, there is no shadow, especially with a fireball.
Also, that long thing... is that her left arm? I don't know what it is really, because it is rather faint. You should try making the limbs more consistent as well. My suggestion would be to take a figure-drawing course or use some photos for reference. Read up on some tutorials on anatomy, perspective, and lighting. Those will help you make a better picture. You can even find those tutorials and lessons on google, so look them up!
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is it just me or is SHOOP DA WHOOP overrated? lol
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Yes v much fun to draw because I have never done something like it before xD
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is it just me or is SHOOP DA WHOOP overrated? lol
check out the hedgehog club today! :iconTheHedgehogClub:
And the shading needs work. In some places it's good, but you need to make it consistant. Like on the girl's hand and wrist, the fireball should give off more light, so there wouldn't be a shadow so close to it on her wrist. A shadow is basically the absence of light. When you have light, there is no shadow, especially with a fireball.
Also, that long thing... is that her left arm? I don't know what it is really, because it is rather faint. You should try making the limbs more consistent as well. My suggestion would be to take a figure-drawing course or use some photos for reference. Read up on some tutorials on anatomy, perspective, and lighting. Those will help you make a better picture. You can even find those tutorials and lessons on google, so look them up!
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DDR with ma Fingers of Fire!
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And what race is you? Draenei?
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Ringo: They fly now?! O__o
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He's a warrior...but he looks like a hunter -_-" grr
Mez can't make anything look like its supposed to T_T
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Warrior, ah, yea, they can use bow to pull mobs. x'D
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Diem: OMG, I just saw a flying Draenei!
Ringo: They fly now?! O__o
Kawaii Neko desu! :3
/l、
゙(゚、 。 7
l、゙ ~ヽ
じしf_, )ノ
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